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LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL
2009-08-29 . chapter 11
!!Amazing!
!!Loved It!!
Achmed's Daughter
2009-08-11 . chapter 11
It is wonderful... but I noticed that it says that there will be another chapter and this was last updated August 28, 2008. That is almost a year and if you are still using this account, I WOULD LOVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! It is amazing already and I'm sure an ending would be even better.
TsukiyoTenshi
2009-05-31 . chapter 11
This is so GOOD!! I STILL can't believe that the Order is using Harry like a marionette! That is by far the worst a person can do to someone (besides attack, raping, etc.). I was also surprised at how both Hermione and Severus looked. Who knew that it was THAT long since Severus saw Hermione, and yet not too long at all.
I realy like this story!

PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! I SO CAN'T WAIT!
Celestial Moonwalker
2009-05-05 . chapter 11
I do so hope it gets updated. I really like it. Though you twisted time-turner application shamelessly *wry smile*
Celestial Moonwalker
2009-05-05 . chapter 2
*evil cackle* How quaint!
Mr. G
2009-01-03 . chapter 11
May I bear your children?
IWanderingSoul
2009-01-02 . chapter 11
A fascinating, simply wonderful story which pulled me in from the start. The interaction between Hermione and Severus is well-written, and despite her many added abilities you've made her a plausible charcter.
missevilprincess
2008-09-05 . chapter 11
Good luck with the paper. :D I just found out about this story and I'm loving it. :D:D

It reminds me of another story actually but I can't remember which one though. o.O

One thing I suggest is to maybe add more depth to this story? This chapter did a little bit of that, but there needs to be more character development...
excessivelyperky
2008-09-05 . chapter 11
This is really good. Both of them are scarred, and both of are them are willing to reveal them to each other. In the times they live in, that is real trust.
LeaFairy124
2008-08-29 . chapter 11
Very intriguing story! The plot is simply great and well written. I love the undercover super Hermione storyline... she is my favorite character after all. *grins*

I would love to read more!!
sci-fied
2008-08-28 . chapter 11
I didn't get the urge to groan when I read about the time turner...because you are one of the few authors who actually used it well.

Intriguing storyline and engaging characters. Looking forward to more.

gray-eyed
Sinkme
2008-08-28 . chapter 11
awesome chapter- i liked how hermione and snape were able to connect and i think that this story could be really good. keep it up
aS.iNNocenT.aS.a.DeaTH.EaTeR.
2008-07-08 . chapter 10
wow! this is fantastic. i desperately await more.
Sinkme
2008-06-07 . chapter 10
love this story!! i really like how youve developed hermione and snape and im looking forward to the hermione beating the crap out of voldy. like the macbeth reference as well
tambrathegreat
2007-12-22 . chapter 10
Please tell me you are going to finish this. I haven't reviewed because I read the story straight through. I love the complex, intelligent Hermione and the thinking Snape. I would love to see more.
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