Yay, an Amoeba Boys fic! (Unfortunately, this's probably the only one on this site, huh?) I love their stupidity—"Throw away that ring, it ain't money!" Nice MojoBlossom hint in there too. X)

Ah, yes! Femme Fatale is finally in a fanfic! What a rare but awesome occasion. Poor dear, she never can win, can she? Oh well. This was such a funny fanfic! I love how you write the Amoeba Boys. Well, actually, you write all of the characters well. I could definitely see this as an episode. Good job!

(And, oh yes, Blossom baking cookies for Mojo was just the icing on the cake... or at least the chips on the cookies, heeheehee.)

That was awesome! I'm not a big fan of the Amoeba Boys, but I agree that they deserve a little recognition just like every other character in the show.

I think you did well with keeping the Amoeba Boys in character. And it seems just like them to steal a ring and think it worthless. And DOUBLE points for it being a ring with a mind control device! XD The boys had the golden opportunity to make their earlier plan a reality and they chucked it in the gutter *dies laughing* I can so see that happening. And I loved that you added Femme Fetale in there, if just for a moment.

Hmm, now why would Blossom give Mojo cookies? XD I can see why that would leave Mojo very confused.

~Dracori

SkinnySlim22,


That was a pretty good story. It was nice to see something that actually concentrates on the Amoeba Boys for a change. That bit at the end with Femme Fatale was good, too- largely, because she doesn't get as much attention as she should either.

Your grammar was perfect, and many "errors" technically aren't real errors, if you get it.

You did spell the word "audacity" wrong, but other than that, you did good in the spelling department.

Again, it was good to see the Amoeba Boys commit a successful crime for once. It was also a pleasant surprise to see my favorite female chauvinist in the fic, too.

All-in-all, this is a good fic. I'm adding it to my favorites and Dracori's "One of a Kind" community.

Until next time, SkinnySlim22!


Signed with Humility,
Itanu the Author.

That was fantastic! I could totally see this playing out as an episode of the show--it's got the right style of humor and everything! The Amoeba Boys and the Gangreen Gang were perfectly in-character, and the twist at the end was great and completely unexpected. And Blossom bringing Mojo cookies? WIN.

Great job!