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| Lami-chan 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful |
| speadee 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThat's a good way to describe Captain Tezuka's view and dreams on Echizen: as the universe. There are people who seem the world or universe to us. |
| kitsune16487 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusesequel? |
| Tuli-Susi 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing, and brilliant and awe-inspiring and absolutley great! I love the description and the 'waking up from a dream' has been done before, but I think your spin 'it was great' was ver well done |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI like your writing style. And the metaphor you showed in this one-shot. I think you're a very good moodmaker. Keep up the good work! -R |
| cherushiichan 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abusewow deep |
| Gwynhafra 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseAw...it was only a dream. Poor Tezuka. Hope to see more TezuRyo fics from you. Hopefully you'd have a continuation for this. -Gwyn |