Very interesting, to say the least. Good characterization, and I like how you reference Japanese culture much more than I do.

A solid effort so far. I suggest expansion upon.

Oh, and a note. I have a story with the exact same name as yours, except that it's The Attraction Of Haruhi Suzumiya and not The Attraction of Suzumiya Haruhi. Just saying.

It's good so far. Nice work.

Nice fic :) Liked it a lot.

Try not to put an author's note in the middle.

-The Shadow

Next time put the author's notes at the beginning or end of the story. It's really distracting when people put them in the middle of a story; it breaks the flow of the writing. Anyway other than that I really liked the way you did this. You've got Kyon's character spot-on. Overall an extremely amusing story, I liked it.

oh HO ho! Kyon you lover boy!
I love the way you've written this!

Pretty good job of conveying the novels' style. Quite good.

Aw... that was cute. It made me smile. ^-^

Very well made, I really liked this. It was so cool and orginal.

Thank you,

Ruto Kuntai

heh your fic is cute. It shows how much Kyon doesn't want to admit his feelings for Haruhi

Amusing, but the grammar is a bit messy in some spots. Also, author's notes really shouldn't go in the middle of a story. It's really distracting for the reader.

"Snow sparkles just like your eyes,
Yuki Nagato.
Please be my one love."

Hehe, very clever idea. You've done a great job covering his charcter as well as his internal monologue and wandering mind. I enjoyed that a lot.

There will be more, right?

Don Piano

I think you have the narration parts nailed down. There are some snippets that I find funny, such as Kyon's constant thoughts or Haruhi. Please continue!

TEA!