WHY does this story not have more reviews? It's a crime. This was a spectacular one-shot. The transitions were a little abrupt and hard to follow (a page break or a notice would make it more appealing), but the rest of the story was virtually flawless. Herman was a little out-of-character in the sense that he was a little touchy-feely, but overall, I loved this.

Aww, love it. You did keep them in character well, though I admit Herman was a little too... umm, fluffy? Can't really find much wrong with this grammar wise, so great job.

Oh, and you're right, I did see a hint of Carl x Herman. Tis OK, i've actually been toying with that coupling idea myself. I'm gonna write a one-shot on it one day, but not right now. I have to say though, i always thought if one of 'em was gonna say it it'd be Carl.

And FINALLY someone wrote something about Carls father. I've been dying to see a fic on it. XD

Well, great fic! Keep up the good work! I'd love to see a few more Yin Yang Yo fanfics by you X3

Flash ^_^
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