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Reviews For: the power of 4 and a cousin for the power of 5

PeterPanTinkerBell27
2008-06-05
ch 8,
abuseFOOD FIGHT! sorry couldn't resist lol
kitcatofthenight
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseYou need to Cap. letters for names. I really didnt like your writing style very much. This plot would have been good
allenterrill
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseToo short, poorly written, and mellinda's only child was named Prudence. Prue was named after her. Restart this story.
mallratrebel
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseplot is good but it is confusing when you don't put '' before and after sentences.and it makes it easier to read when you write down not across.keep writin
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