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| PeterPanTinkerBell27 2008-06-05 ch 8, | abuseFOOD FIGHT! sorry couldn't resist lol |
| kitcatofthenight 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseYou need to Cap. letters for names. I really didnt like your writing style very much. This plot would have been good |
| allenterrill 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseToo short, poorly written, and mellinda's only child was named Prudence. Prue was named after her. Restart this story. |
| mallratrebel 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseplot is good but it is confusing when you don't put '' before and after sentences.and it makes it easier to read when you write down not across.keep writin |