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| Nerikla 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseNonsensical? Perhaps. But very true to Spot's character, and a fantastic window into a moment in his life. I loved it. Now, when I find the time, I plan on reading your new, longer stories. XD |
| studentnumber24601 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseSee, once again, I'm reviewing something I've already read, because apparently I suck hard at leaving you reviews. I will try to be much better about that in the future. Anyway. This is a really good, short piece--very evocative of INY, actually. It feels a lot like the same Spot, who prefers to pretend he doesn't care but actually can't stand the thought of leaving his people without protection. I LOVE your Spot, by the way. So yes: short and lovely in every way. |
| Harmony Remarc 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseGood use of the questions from the challenge. I love that kid that was tagging along beside Spot. "Voice bright and pleased"... I can just picture that! And awesome description of the rain with the baptismal water. Kind of reminds me of the Great Chicago Fire... the rain arriving to drench the fires. |
| hilby 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fantastic piece of fiction right here. Beautiful, sparse imagery. I'd love to know which riots these revolve around :D (Go on, humor me in my history major geekery; I do love it so.) |
| Queen Kez the Wicked 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseZOMG WINTERS TALE HOLY ** YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE I KNOW IT if not.. LOOK, WINTERS TALE!! also, i feel like this could almost be a BoB fic (well just the bullet part, like.. oh you know) anyway i like you kinda-almost-sorta-melding fandoms. apologies for the incoherentness.. i have been driving for 3 hrs and now i'm hoome. thanks for answering a challychallchallngee i really, really like it. ..i'm not punch drunk, i'm just dead. love, me. |
| cymbalism 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic. You absolutely captured Spot for me -- surly, stubborn, but with more heart and commitment than even he realizes. Again your writing is smooth and tight -- you make sure your words all do work. Thanks for the good read. |