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Reviews For: Wounded

Nerikla
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseNonsensical? Perhaps. But very true to Spot's character, and a fantastic window into a moment in his life. I loved it.

Now, when I find the time, I plan on reading your new, longer stories. XD
studentnumber24601
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseSee, once again, I'm reviewing something I've already read, because apparently I suck hard at leaving you reviews. I will try to be much better about that in the future.

Anyway. This is a really good, short piece--very evocative of INY, actually. It feels a lot like the same Spot, who prefers to pretend he doesn't care but actually can't stand the thought of leaving his people without protection. I LOVE your Spot, by the way.

So yes: short and lovely in every way.
Harmony Remarc
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abuseGood use of the questions from the challenge.

I love that kid that was tagging along beside Spot. "Voice bright and pleased"... I can just picture that!

And awesome description of the rain with the baptismal water.

Kind of reminds me of the Great Chicago Fire... the rain arriving to drench the fires.
hilby
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is a fantastic piece of fiction right here. Beautiful, sparse imagery. I'd love to know which riots these revolve around :D (Go on, humor me in my history major geekery; I do love it so.)
Queen Kez the Wicked
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseZOMG WINTERS TALE
HOLY ** YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE I KNOW IT
if not.. LOOK, WINTERS TALE!!
also, i feel like this could almost be a BoB fic (well just the bullet part, like.. oh you know) anyway i like you kinda-almost-sorta-melding fandoms.
apologies for the incoherentness.. i have been driving for 3 hrs and now i'm hoome. thanks for answering a challychallchallngee
i really, really like it.
..i'm not punch drunk, i'm just dead.
love, me.
cymbalism
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is fantastic. You absolutely captured Spot for me -- surly, stubborn, but with more heart and commitment than even he realizes. Again your writing is smooth and tight -- you make sure your words all do work. Thanks for the good read.
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