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| Von 2007-09-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseHa! Clone-envy. This is cute and a little sad.. We always want what we haven't got. I think the clone definately got the worst end of it, simply for the emotional/psychological reasons. Old!Jack is starting to doubt himself, starting to regret his age.. but he still has those three most important people. Will there be any more? I hope so. Some resolution and peace for both of them would be nice.. :) |
| SJAuthor 2007-07-31 ch 2,  | abuseWonderfully done! Very insightful :) |
| katejones2005 2007-07-15 ch 2, | abusegreat job!! |
| mara-anni 2007-07-14 ch 2, | abuseYeah, i figured that's how he would feel. Great work...so sad... |
| Khentkawes 2007-07-13 ch 2, | abuseWow that was... depressing. But dead-on. You have the voice of teenage Jack down perfectly. As much as I'd like to imagine that he was happy, I always wondered how he could handle losing his entire life and starting over. You express his frustration and regrets so well. Nice job. |
| katejones2005 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abusegreat |
| Khentkawes 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseInteresting perspective. I like the way you handle Jack's voice. But I do have a desire to smack some sense into him. He thinks he's useless on SG1? He thinks Carter can do his job better than he can? Yeah, right. I have a few choice words to say about that. But anyway, I wonder how you'll handle the teenage Jack's perspective. I'm sure it will be interesting and I'm sure he'll have his regrets as well. After all, the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence. Looking forward to the next half. |
| mara-anni 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic. I always like the way you write for Jack. I'm defintely interested in miniJack's take on the situation...i'm willing to bet he doesn't think its so great after all. |
| PatriciaS 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseNicely written and an interesting point of view. Looking forward to the next one when he is a teen... well sort of. |