 akatsuki ryuu948 2009-10-30 . chapter 31i can only say TWO word...UPDATE PLEASE. |
 Darthme1011 2009-09-29 . chapter 30fun story |
 Shiva the Sarcastic 2009-09-22 . chapter 31I like it. Please update soon. |
 SSJ Pac-man 2009-09-20 . chapter 30 Lol Bunny is so funny |
 Shiva the Sarcastic 2009-09-11 . chapter 30Cool. Nice work. Please update soon. |
 marc 2009-07-01 . chapter 2 great story, keep up the good work! |
 Fullmetal Knight 2009-06-30 . chapter 29I honestly read every chapter today. This story is awesome. At first I thought that Vegeta was trying to take Gohan as a future mate for his daughter but now it's more clearer |
 Shiva the Sarcastic 2009-06-30 . chapter 29Wonderful work. It was nice to see an amiable breakup between them. At least Yamcha and Bulma are on good terms. Top-notch writing. Please update soon. |
 jakeub 2009-06-30 . chapter 29Man, it took you 25 days... ugh update quicker :D Anyways I'm glad to see it's over between Bulma and Yamcha. I do have one question though. Was Gohan confused about who the father was, or did he just not have any understanding of sex. I thought he was confused about the father but wasn't sure. You could probably skip ahead to the androids now. |
 Knight25 2009-06-30 . chapter 29Good chapter. |
 chris 2009-06-06 . chapter 28 interesting story are you gona make vegeta something like a father figure to gohan close to what goku was in the hyberbolic time chamber when he was training gohan when they train in the chamber? |
 Shiva the Sarcastic 2009-06-05 . chapter 28Great chapter. I like how you handle their personalities and keep them pretty rue to the show. Please update soon. |
 Knight25 2009-06-05 . chapter 28Good chapter. |
 jakeub 2009-06-05 . chapter 28Man it's been a while. I almost forgot about your story... Anyways... I'm really enjoying this fic, looks like Fruiche is getting a bit jealous. Well update soon! :D |
 G. Login 2009-04-08 . chapter 27Her making it in pill form makes sense. If she did some how go back and get the cure to Goku the last thing she would want would be for him to die because he refused to take a needle, Lol. That would suck. |