Alf was my favorite number one show please continue!

lol yay i like it

Now this isn't finished, all this work reading it and it isn't finished.

Oh wonderful, snoopy kids. oh well, more trouble in paradise right?

Oh lord help that classroom grin. Poor kids and bye bye kitty.

Oh this is rich, utterly done in alf style, thanks for the rolicking story.

I love Alf. Hes soo cool.

Vote 4 Alf

Vote 4 Alf.

Keep Moveing Foward

As Franela would say... "Oy, vey!"

Poor Brian. If only ALF didn't have that freaky feline fetish.

I can't wait to find out what happens next. You always leave me wanting more!

I like how you end each chapter with an uh-oh cliffhanger.

LOL @ "But you don't see ME eating other people's pets!" (I think the apostrophe actually belongs before the "s," like I have it, because "people" itself is already plural.)

You know, you'd be a fantastic sitcom writer. You have really creative ideas and you write dialogue extremely well.

Aww, you mentioned me again! I feel so special inside, hehe.

The cat carrier change made a big difference and cleared up any confusion. Good work. :)

I'm glad you liked my idea. Always happy to be a substitute muse. If only it paid more... heck, if only it paid, period. And I very much appreciate you giving me credit. :)

LOL @ "At this, both Brian and ALF's eyes went wide, each for a different reason." Uh oh. Nice foreshadowing. You let us know that something not so good is going to happen but leave us wondering just when and how things will go awry.

Looking forward to more!

First off, nice summary. Got my interest peaked.

I like your short and sweet chapters. They leave the reader craving more.

And I also love your humor. You'd make a great sitcom writer.