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| hinatachan the itaxnaru luv... 2008-06-28 ch 4,  | abuseAlf was my favorite number one show please continue! |
| Naomi Friesen 2008-06-09 ch 4, | abuselol yay i like it |
| Kerri 2008-04-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseNow this isn't finished, all this work reading it and it isn't finished. |
| Kerri 2008-04-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh wonderful, snoopy kids. oh well, more trouble in paradise right? |
| Kerri 2008-04-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh lord help that classroom grin. Poor kids and bye bye kitty. |
| Kerri 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh this is rich, utterly done in alf style, thanks for the rolicking story. |
| Ember411 2007-12-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love Alf. Hes soo cool. Vote 4 Alf Vote 4 Alf. Keep Moveing Foward |
| Allison Lindsay 2007-09-08 ch 4, | abuseAs Franela would say... "Oy, vey!" Poor Brian. If only ALF didn't have that freaky feline fetish. I can't wait to find out what happens next. You always leave me wanting more! |
| Allison Lindsay 2007-08-05 ch 3, | abuseI like how you end each chapter with an uh-oh cliffhanger. LOL @ "But you don't see ME eating other people's pets!" (I think the apostrophe actually belongs before the "s," like I have it, because "people" itself is already plural.) You know, you'd be a fantastic sitcom writer. You have really creative ideas and you write dialogue extremely well. |
| Allison Lindsay 2007-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseAww, you mentioned me again! I feel so special inside, hehe. The cat carrier change made a big difference and cleared up any confusion. Good work. :) |
| Allison Lindsay 2007-07-22 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad you liked my idea. Always happy to be a substitute muse. If only it paid more... heck, if only it paid, period. And I very much appreciate you giving me credit. :) LOL @ "At this, both Brian and ALF's eyes went wide, each for a different reason." Uh oh. Nice foreshadowing. You let us know that something not so good is going to happen but leave us wondering just when and how things will go awry. Looking forward to more! |
| Allison Lindsay 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, nice summary. Got my interest peaked. I like your short and sweet chapters. They leave the reader craving more. And I also love your humor. You'd make a great sitcom writer. |