That was a beatiful story, i found myself in an emotional rollacoster. I don't think words could complete the feelings i felt throughout reading 'Just one more chance'. I really hope that you continue to write stories that don't have the typical ending, like for instance, a sweet ending. I enjoy tragic ends and stories that have you schocked about what happened, stories that keep you guessing, your story did that. I found myself looking away from the screen just from shock. Please CONTINUE WRITING!

keep going keep going please! its so good

Kewl ^^
Great job! Love the song! I love this story!
HxB 4eva!

Aw that was cute, though they should have stayed 2gether. =)

Anyway, nice story can't wait 2 read more
Bunny out!!

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wow! Now this is one sad chapter, and I for damn scary reason really enjoyed reading it. Don't get me wrong it's a great chapter, but sad stories always make me want to cry and maybe ever throw fits. Oh well.

that is so sad, making them suffer over and over again. but it is a good story.

It's heart breaking that they have to leave one another again ...but, I's comforting to know that they'll meet again! =^^= So YEA!

This is great! Update soon Please! I wanna see what happens next! I'm so excited!

wow.
that was sad.
i cant wait til you update!
plz make it soon?
its just a great story =]

Cool new chap! I think I know where you're going with this. Keep it up!

yes...it was one sad chapter, but it had to happen. Well I thought it was really good and I did cry. The ending was really sad. I couldn't give this review until I stopped crying. That's how much it affected me!

Beautiful! :D Anyway...stupid Hiei. He so should've gone after Botan but NO. Moron. -sigh- I can't believe she chose to forget him. Damnit. Oh well...thanks for the update! ^^

AWSOME! :D Wow...Botan's dad broke his promise?! I'm so glad Hiei killed him..all of them. Especially that Jaku-teme. -nod- Anyway thanks again for the update...I can't wait for the next one. Oh and I also liked the lyrics you put up. ^^

Me again! This is awsome! The best one of yours I've read! So cute! Friday huh? I'll be waiting!

*sniff* oh man...*sniff, sniff* that made me cry, but in a good way. And I hate to sound violent, but her father did deserve for what he did to her. WEll anywho, it was a great chapter and keep up the great work!