This was mesmerizing. I like the way you think.

This made no sense at all. I love it.

This... Is possibly THE saddest fic with a semi-happy ending I have read EVER. Poor Akatsuki, poor (kinda) Team Hebi. WAH! WHY TOBI! TOBI WAS A GOOD BOY!

This may every well be one of the most amazing fics I have ever read in my life. Beautiful.

I love this story!

i really like this.

i read this a while back and lost it i could not find this beautiful story of yore's but now i found it again thanks for writing this story. :)

What an original concept. Gorgeous!

This is such great .. so sad, very sad

I don't know why, but Deidara execution really got to me. I love how Sakura kissed Itachi even though she hated him. I bet he got some peace before his death.

So beautiful.

i cried TTTT

This is really just plain marvelous. The narration is perfect for a one shot - simple, but evocative of the intense emotion that the subject matter demands.

Stuff like this is what writing is all about. It's more than just writing - more than just a story. I don't know how to describe it, but I equate it to Truth - that elusive thing that people try to find. This rings of Truth and it's special because you did it perfectly.

If there is ever a talent for words and capturing of emotional understanding that I wish I could replicate, it would be yours. I've read one other piece that was very similar to this in the way it was written and the impact that it had on me, and it was a Dynasty Warriors one shot. It was one of those pieces that I had other people read because it was so well done that anyone could appreciate the sentiment.

This is just like it and I'll definitely be sharing it with others. Thank you for writing it - you have a real talent.

This story was somewhat...Whimsical? Wistful?

It was floaty and absolutely beautiful and touching.

I think is the first Zabuza and Sakura story I've ever read, but I can tell you that from now on, I'll be reading a lot more. As long as there are more :D

Thank you for writing this, it was lovely.

Beautiful...

I'm crying I loved this so much. Not quite sobbing, but there's definintely a few tears.

No errors, not a damn thing I would change. It's perfect.