when are you going to post another chapter?
i love this story

die may die

i really hope that you update soon please
i like your story very much and i want to know the rest

ooh...
what're they gonna talk about??
update more...
thanks we...

oh...
ouch to sora!!
i'll kill that may!!

You could try what I do... I write my story in 1 file. then to create each chapter I mark each one within the file itself. after that to post each individual chapter; I create a new blank file, temporarily copy and paste the chapter I want to post.

after all that I delete the temp file, on my comp, after I post it here.

this way I can just scroll to re-read the story if I need to remember something.

hey, this was great! please update soon :D

So, LaylaYuri and SoraLeon have kids in the series? I don't remember seeing that in the anime.

okay... that was weird.
Maya is so mean..
i wish leo would find out that his real mom is sora.

update soon!!

~hugsh-pugsh~

die maya!! hahah
i'm being mean again...

well.. i want a family reunion again...
sora and leon... wa

~hugsh-tugsh~

that was a great chapter :) poor sora and sara but i thought that Leon would stop that ** may from hitting his daughter anyways update soon :) i love this story

can`t wait for the next chapter :x

Yay! you updated...i like how you emphasized Maya's condition as a THING...hehe...well update soon (if you can)

Maya isn't Leon's daughter?? *sigh of relief*
The whole family had a get together...
Sora lied again... new boyfriend... more like same boyfriend...

update soon...

OMG! Sora "meets" Leon in this chapter! Oh i can't wait for the next one.