 That-Fresh-Rain-Smell 2007-07-14 . chapter 1Oh...my...god...!
-falls into a puddle of wailing, crying, body-wreaking sobs of delight-
I CANNOT believe you wrote this for me. I am just in shock. I have no idea. I can't even...
ohmygawd. |
 SilverKestrel 2007-07-13 . chapter 1 You haven't done too badly yourself. In fact, I love it. Maybe because I can sympathise...sort of.
SilverKestrel |
 mildetryth 2007-07-13 . chapter 1Oh my! Oh my! oh my ohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyOHMY!
That was indeed unlike everything else you've written up so far, my dear! But don't get me wrong: I ADORE IT!
'Twas dark and obsessive and deep and lustful and hungry... 'Twas unlike anything else of you and still it has 'Boosty' written all over it! Why? I'll tell you why: BECAUSE IT WAS SUPAH-WONDERFUL-ECSTACY WRITTEN!
And for all those who have something against Snarry: Get it people! Snape's SO sexy (just picture Alan Rickman in the tub and you'll know what I mean) and Harry's cute! They're made for each other!
Yazzi, me girl, Noodles to you!
Milly
P.S. Hey, you're right... when it's secret it won't be secret when we put it on your profile... Hmm... tricky, tricky... |
 PhoenixThestral 2007-07-12 . chapter 1wow, very nice |
 Ashyx 2007-07-12 . chapter 1slashficslashficslashfic! SQUE! ((is in a shonen-ai (boyxboy) mood)) I like it! 'specially since you can't quite tell who's talking about who. Wonderfully written, Yazzi! |
 Artemis Hunt 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Very good for a Snarry, I really like it. Some of them just make me shudder but this is interesting to read and I'm always a fan of the mysterious no names thing! |
 whitehound 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Well written, especially the bit about not being able to tell one character's breath from the other.
You've got a couple of weird typoes though: "from him to I" should be "from him to me", and you mean a "surly" gaze, not "surely". |