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| Sky Falls 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was nice. I liked how you portrayed the characters; it made it seem realistic. This was done very well. |
| Serria 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseAw.. that was beautiful. "Then... he would forgive them both. Until that time, he would wait, and watch, and be their rock, because that was what friends did." What a perfect line! It made me happy and sad, because it was so bittersweet. I really like this piece, good job! |
| phoenix of hell 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseVery good sequel. I like the fact that L decided to do nothing. I hope the forgiving part means he won't turn them in... Sweet, really, and that thing with friendship... Really liked it. |