 Shinjiteru 2009-04-24 . chapter 4Damnit! I read this story two years ago, and then I lost it. I looked everywhere for it, and when I ** find it again- there's only one new chapter? ONE!
T_T I don't know what happened with this story, but I just want you to know it's AWESOME. The plot is interesting and Kurama and Hiei are adorable! I loved them both! I loved every bit of this story. And there it is, unupdated for far too long. I know that it happens (when you lose interest in a certain story) but can you please notice it for all of us? I'm sure many readers would be glad to know for sure what's up with this great fic. If you can, please try and find your muse- if you can't than I'm graetful for the story so far- I had great fun reading it!
Thank you again :)
And another boost- you're awesome and this story is great, and I'm not the only one thinking so. |
 kittyluv 2009-02-19 . chapter 4Very interesting so far. Caught me off guard when Kurama was the blind one. Hope to see more! |
 ILoveKuramaTooMuch 2009-01-29 . chapter 4You´re doing a great job with this story. I love your writing. I read this about four months ago but there is still not any updating and I am going to worry about this story. Would you be so kind and continue? It sure would not hurt to spoil your fans with few more chapters. Well, good luck! |
 CelestialMoonDragon 2008-06-10 . chapter 4This is one of the most original Hiei/Kurama (and Yusuke/Koenma) fics I've ever come across. I'd love to read more. |
 TwlightMystery 2008-02-27 . chapter 4O.o wow I don't think I've seen this particular style of writing under the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom before. It doesn't hurt that you've got a kick-** plot to boot! I'm really liking where you’re heading with this. I wonder how long it's going to take these two to figure out their attraction? I hope not to long, I'm impatient but for this I think the wait will be worth the while. Good luck with your next chapter and please update when you have the time ^_^ |
 RosePetalDreams 2008-02-13 . chapter 4I absolutely love this story. It's well written and combines several different elements. I'm addicted! Can't you update soon pretty please? *cute puppy dog eyes* I update for you! And I'm not above begging in the case of this story. It's excellent and I can't wait for the next chapter.
~RosePetal |
 Anna Jaganshi 2008-02-02 . chapter 4Oh... whoops. ^^' Well, two years to 17 isn't bad, right?
Eight chapters, she says! *dances happily* Go you! And it was practically all dedicated to the lemon. Naughty you, but I'm not complaining. ;D Wow, only the second? And you're THIS good? More kudos to you, definately!
Wa-ha-ha, this was more than liked! I was wondering how Kurama would have answered Hiei, but this made up for it. ^_^ Wonderful job; keep them coming, please! |
 Vampiress-06 2008-01-30 . chapter 4that's cute...update soon |
 DemonUntilDeath 2008-01-29 . chapter 4OMG I love you! Ah, heat flashes, heat flashes! I'm too young to be having these! Oh my...That was amazing...now I just want to read one between Kurama and Hiei. ^.^ I love you so much, and your story. This has got to be one of my favs...god, I want more! Gr. ...Have you updated yet? |
 happydemonhobo 2008-01-29 . chapter 4You updated...I have to be dreaming because that was one hot lemon...well, either way...I'll take it...:) |
 ladyasile 2008-01-28 . chapter 4aww, yusuke and koenma... i'm still thinking about hiei's outburst... anyways, thanks for updating!! and with a great lemon, no less!! i hope you update soon!!
:-) |
 lightless love 2008-01-28 . chapter 4ah! MORE KURAMA AND HIEI! i just love them together =] sorry...well...keep up the great work!
WRITE ON! =] |
 shiorifoxiesmom 2008-01-28 . chapter 4When ever I read a new chapter of a story, I always glance back at my last review to refresh my memory. When I saw I hadn't reviewed this it took me a minute to realize DUH I was reading it over on AFF.
That may have only been your second 'written' lemon but with all your experience reading them it was f-ing awesome.
I just love Yusuke and Koenma together, I don't know why I've never written them together. I always think of Yususke dominant but the way you write him as the younger lover it might be fun to have Koenma dominate him.
Update soon. |
 chrono-contract 2008-01-28 . chapter 4one word: HOT! |
 sesshy's numba1 gurl 2008-01-28 . chapter 4that was a really good lemon. and you weren't kidding when you said it was long. lol. update soon! |