|Reviews for When Mommy Returns|
| gentlemoonbell 12/23/10 . chapter 1
I was in tears by the end of this story. Thank you so much for such a good read.
| Jen-2b 6/21/10 . chapter 1
Oh, this was heartbreaking.
Little Dean, lost and waiting for his mom to return, taking so good care of Sammy. I also liked that you showed how Bobby started to take care of them as well.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us.
I will definitely read your other stories as well :)
Greetings from Germany
| badaiwind 1/22/09 . chapter 1
| CagedTroll 10/24/07 . chapter 1
Wow, that was just an emotional gut-punch.
You really got into the head of a small child beautifully, the worry and the innocent belief are just awful - in a good way.
God, and now I just want to give Dean a hug. :(
| alwaysateen 7/14/07 . chapter 1
So sad. Sniff. Poor Dean, thinking his mother is coming back.
I really love Bobby's interaction with the boys. And how Dean talk only to Sam.
| Nana56 7/13/07 . chapter 1
So Alicia's kids are older than the boys...almost fullgrown in the other story?
Really heartwrenching little fic. Poor little Dean!
I just really love Bobby!
| pandora jazz 7/13/07 . chapter 1
What an excellent story!
Loved how you wrote Dean as he took care of Sam and talked to him about their mom. How sad that even though John said mommy was not coming back, Dean was still trying to make her proud and take care of his little brother like she would have wanted.
I like how you let us see Dean through Bobby's eyes. Bobby was great with Dean. If he did meet the brothers when they were this young and watched them grow, one can understand why he was so upset after guessing what deal Dean made to bring Sam back from the dead.
Had to smile when Dean remembered 'that five minutes would melt the bottle which was why he wasn't allowed to use the microwave in the first place.'
Loved how little Sammy responded to his brother, calming in his arms and listening to his big brother's voice.
Enjoyed your story.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Hermione Vader 7/12/07 . chapter 1
This is wonderful. It has great fluffy Wee!chester-ness without being too mushy.
| seayeah 7/12/07 . chapter 1
*cries & cries*
Oh this was so traumatising and beautiful to read.
| Lalis 7/12/07 . chapter 1
AW! too sad! and very sweet too... Oww,I wanna hug Dean right now! LOL congrats!
| sammygirl1963 7/12/07 . chapter 1
WOW WHAt an awesome oneshot. Dean's belief was so firm that his mom would be coming back. I felt bad for Bobby listening to what Dean was saying and knowing that it was tearing Bobby's heart out.
I would love to see a second chapter added or a sequel to where Bobby talks to John about what Dean said-and see how John handles the situation.
| rozzy07 7/12/07 . chapter 1
Well you left me in tears of sheer heartbreak for little Dean so sure that his mommy was coming back. Bobby's reaction at the sink as he washed the dishes and listened to the normally silent child talk to his baby brother convinced that their mom was coming back to them made my mascara run even more. Wonderful piece of writing. Thanks so much for sharing it out for others to enjoy
| irishgirl9 7/12/07 . chapter 1
That was so sad! Well Written! Great job!
| AllieMcD 7/12/07 . chapter 1
that was amazing, i was actually a bit in tears at the end poor, poor wee!dean, sigh, that was really well done