i think it's really well written the storyline is also very interesting...please continue :)

that was nice. when is the new chapter?

i can't wait for more chapter >.

I'm officially addicted to the couple, so how about an update?

Hey dude write some more that was short!! but it's great!! Good job! :D

Oh this is getting good! You see, I've been bored one day and so I just randomly thought about this possible couple, thinking: "Kikyo and Naraku really should hook up, he needs to get laid." XD So now I'm addicted to this couple. >< So good story! Ignore my babbling, seeing as...I talk... a lot...sometimes...

Nice, please do continue. ;)

Good start. I can see this fic going in a lot of possible directions, which makes it exciting. You have good grammar and spelling too; many good fics have been ruined by their lack!

I wonder if this is the direction the story would have gone in if Takahashi-sensei didn't have to be so careful of her audiences youth...hee hee.

wow, interesting, i really do love narakuxkikyou. please please contiue. i would be ever so grateful! :)

Ohh I am so glad that you posted this, koi! Hehehe...I have so much fun writing with you, and this fic is one of my absolute favorites that we've done so far. I can't wait to continue with you