its sucks dawn is ashes favirote she shought date ash

i will vote for misty

I love this story. Man you did a great job. I think Ash and Dawn make a great couple. There just perfect for each other. Any way please make them be together. My name is meghan.

GOOD! What about Pikachu, though? I kinda think there should be: Brock, for an advice giver, and a sequel!! :) awesome!

Love all the chapters, i love it in general, And the only reasom i made an account was so i could review! :D I give it 46178934687123946789231/5 stars :D ;Rating all chapters;

you should make alternete endings this one was bad!

THAT WAS THE ONLY BAD ONE

Well it will be tough to get my reveiw to fit in only 10 charecters, but Dawn should have gotten Ash. May's just too mean for him.

misty deffinately should
she was with him from the very beginning

Misty

the best eva' !
LOVED the Ds Game part and the nickel part LOL!

Blader you can add my Pokemon
Infernape(male) my starter
Staraptor(female)
Floatzel (female)
Luxray(male)
Lucario(female) got it as a Riolu egg from Riley
Gastrodon(east sea)
Moves
Infernape:Flamethrower flame wheel, Mach Punch, and Rock Climb
Staraptor:Fly Defog Aerial Ace and Close Combat
Floatzel:Surf Crunch Razor wind and Blizzard.
Luxray:Spark Thunder Fang Crunch and Iron Tail
Lucario:Screech Strength Rock Smash and Dragon Pulse
Gastrodon:Waterfall Hidden Power Rain Dance, and Muddy Watter

...and that was kinda strange, 'cause right now I'm in a SSB rut. Aah! You're psychic, aren't you!

I loved this whole story! I am a little disapointed that Misty is married to Gary, but I can imagine differently. The story was just too good. I liked the hallenges instead of Pokemon battles for a change. My favorite challenge was the cooking contest, beacuse I thought it was funny how Misty nearly killed Ash yet she won. I'm sorry, but I am a Misty lover and am kind of sad that Misty and Gary are together. I do'nt mind May, though, it's a decent match. I will have to read you other stories after this one, I was on my feet all night long reading it. Right now, it's about midnight, but I am still so energized from reading!

Misty! I am a Misty lover! This first chapter was terrific and Ilove the idea that I get to vote for who Ash's heart will go to.