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| leader of the neo rangers 2008-07-25 ch 3,  | abusegood story |
| Hazharu 2008-06-03 ch 3, | abuseOh damn... That was intense... 5 out of 5... PS: Why did Kari want to do it with TK in the first place? and How come they knew about sex at a young age? and how come there was no condom?!?!?! |
| BandWhore2011 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abusethis is really good. it's great that their families didn't kick them out. keep going. it's great! ^.^ |
| holyangelofhope 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abuseits a cool story keep it up |
| Jade Starr 2008-04-06 ch 2, | abuseHer belly wouldn't be noticably bigger by a few weeks, she might have a missed period but most girls only gain 5 lbs in their first trimester (3 months) you don't get a notciable belly until 5 months. She might notice breast tenderness, spotting, nausea and a firmer belly. and she would have more of an aversion to food the first 3 months and being tired (fatigue all the time) this isn't a flame, just some helpful hints about biology and for future reference. |
| DeMoN'S DaRk AnGeL 2007-11-21 ch 3, | abusei think u were pretty much on the mark with how the parents would have reacted. i imagined tai being a little more angrier at tk. the way matt handled it was what i would have thought. ur a good writer! put more chapters out! DDA |
| milkshakelvr 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseFYI it takes a few months for a girl to starts showing when she is pregnant...just thought you should know...:) |
| Time Force Red 2007-11-11 ch 3, | abuseGo On please Write More I Like This Story |
| tazkol the master of emeral... 2007-11-10 ch 3, | abuseNice job! though i expected tk would be in alot more pain, good thing tai understood so well. i can see a fist fight with davis in the future, oh, and when mimi hears about this, thats gonna be scary! but i wonder about the digimon? |
| Mike Kromer 2007-11-08 ch 3, | abuseMan that was an eye opener, liking it so far, keep up the good work, although you need to do speeking quotation lines in seperate paragraphs to help destinguish between charitars talking. T.K said, "blah blah..." "blah blah..." replies Kairi somthin like that is what I mean, but I'm awaiting the next chapter |
| Depthmon 2007-11-07 ch 3, | abusebin waiting but it was worth the wait |
| Lord Pata 2007-11-07 ch 3, | abuseReally intense chapter, of course was natural the reactions of their parents and brothers, but at least they are all still together and I'm sure they will get through that ^^ Glad you updated it, I really was missing your fic ^^ |
| KoumiLoccness 2007-11-07 ch 3, | abuseNice chap mon! Peace Koumi Fan Out... And on a quicc Note Taichis and Hikaris Japanese last name is Yagami not Kamiya which is more to write then Yagami you know, lol... |
| Mike Kromer 2007-10-30 ch 2, | abuseMan this looks like a very good story I am egerly waiting fot the next chapter, keep up the good work |
| KoumiLoccness 2007-08-13 ch 2, | abuseCoo G... |