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| Amalockh 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was kind of cute! I loved your description behind Sparky's feelings, like his relationship towards X-5 and Betty. In all honesty however, add a little bit more body to your paragraphs, or describe all the scenery around them. Still, you did a great job. Do more ASAP! |
| MikariStar 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseIt's been a while since there has a been a new story in this section. XD I liked this one, nice concept. Maybe there will be a sequel? |
| Miss NeverWinter 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHellos! Carly-chan here. This is my first time of wandering out of the Anime/Manga, Naruto section, and I though your story ROCKED! Sparky blowing up planet Earth though? Not a nice thought. Anywhos, keep writing. I like it! |
| neilhd 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWhat he meant was Veoh, and I'm the one that posted them all (well, almost all of them). Anyways, that was a great story you wrote. Kind of scary what Sparky was thinking of doing. |
| Thunderstone 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseIf you want to see some Atomic Betty episodes, head to (although be warned that if you have dial up, it'll take *forever* to load). I don't have much more to say except good job :) |