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Reviews For: A Little Something

Amalockh
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseAww! That was kind of cute! I loved your description behind Sparky's feelings, like his relationship towards X-5 and Betty. In all honesty however, add a little bit more body to your paragraphs, or describe all the scenery around them.

Still, you did a great job. Do more ASAP!
MikariStar
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseIt's been a while since there has a been a new story in this section. XD I liked this one, nice concept. Maybe there will be a sequel?
Miss NeverWinter
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseHellos! Carly-chan here. This is my first time of wandering out of the Anime/Manga, Naruto section, and I though your story ROCKED! Sparky blowing up planet Earth though? Not a nice thought. Anywhos, keep writing. I like it!
neilhd
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseWhat he meant was Veoh, and I'm the one that posted them all (well, almost all of them).

Anyways, that was a great story you wrote. Kind of scary what Sparky was thinking of doing.
Thunderstone
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseIf you want to see some Atomic Betty episodes, head to (although be warned that if you have dial up, it'll take *forever* to load).

I don't have much more to say except good job :)
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