Aww...sad...

This was really good! I always kind of wondered what was going through Jamie's mind after Landon told her he loved her. I think you did a marvelous job at writing through Jamie's perspective.

Haha.
No need for such drastic measures.
It's a great beginning to a fantastic story, so don't give up on it(:
I'll be looking forward to your next chapter♥.

Good! And Hell no stop writing fanfiction, it was really cute!

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

im dont want to be mean but...
NAH JUST KIDDING! haha lol GOTCHA! lol lmao.
anyway i havent watched the movie but ive become SO obsessed with this movie and im gonna try to get it on monday! haha lol.
i realy like this chapter and i think its really really good!
to make you feel proud, this is the FIRST 'a walk to remember' fic ive read and its my fave so far. you might be thinking; 'but this is the first one she's read so of course it would be her favourite' but no. out of all the summaries i read, i chose THIS ONE! and im glad of my choice! ;) awsome, dude, awsome!

when i read a fanfic,... no matter what the movie,... i look at the style and the way the author is able to "paint" either a scene or the way a certain character,...their actions,..feeling,... and motivations...

and i feel that in this you couldnt have done a better job,...

i think you show alot of promise... have you ever done anything of your own? not a fanfic on someone elses idea??

Great story!! I love it!!

Hm. I do like this. It's always cool to see what the character is thinking during a scene of great importance. This is nice, and you should continue writing whatever fanfiction strikes your brain and holds water...or a story.

Keep it up!

ROF

Good job! I normally (even though I sometimes write them myself) don't go for one-shots, but I think I can honestly say that I really enjoyed this one. It was very realistic and true to the movie, and altogether, you did a wonderful job. Keep up the great work!
Keep writing,
Lorah :)

P.S. Thank you so much for reviewing my story! Your kind words really meant a lot!

what are you talking about? that was not bad at all, i think that you should definitely continue writing a walk to remember fanfics. :)
it seems that jamie and landon are in a bit of a muddle! but deep inside they love each other... right?! even though jamie told landon not to fall in love with each other, they still did. :) great oneshot, i really liked it! :D
bonboni
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