I absolutely adored this! The horrors you put in added a lot of realism to it, and while I'm generally not in for the bloody, this didn't detract from the story, but rather added to it. Great job!

touching...extremely well written..now i gotta finish your other fic

Another excellent story from one of my favorite authors. Oddly, I never got an alert from this story at the time. Good thing I happened to check your profile today, or I'd never have known about this story. You have one of the rarest gifts for getting into the heart of Saiyans and seeing their regrets realistically. It's too easy for writers to pretend that such things didn't happen, or to create characters that somehow managed to not be involved in those atrocities, but you manage to take characters that were involved in them, and make them likable and realistic. I've always thought you were the best Radditz writer, but that now extends to Nappa and his sons. Whom I will always think of with the names that you created and the personalities you've given them, even if those aren't canon. :-)

Wow... How can I put this into words? This is amazing. I am sorry it took so long for me to review this.

Very cool! I didn't think you were still writing.

beautiful! and you hardly used the actual charachters from DBZ. that takes talent! excellent

Nice. Just one question: When they ended up in front of Lord Enma again, were they still in the past or did the explosion catapult them back to the future they'd left from, and if the former, what happened to Apio and Crishan's past spirits?