 Always a Bookworm 5/13/10 . chapter 14*cries* Oh, too sad! I loved the story he told- at first I thought it was going to be a really cute, funny one, but then the line 'We were together until he passed away about a year ago' came like a slap in the face, really sudden. Well done for keeping us on our toes! XD!
I felt so sorry for poor Atem in this... the whole idea of 'poison' was clever, and that last line was absolutely heartbreaking! So sad! D:
As for the 'little lover'... I'm guessing Yugi (because of the whole 'little' thing! ) although I guess it could be Ryou, or maybe even Mokuba or someone like that!
Well done on another amazing chapter, and keep up the good work! :D
Bookworm |
 dragonlady222 5/12/10 . chapter 14Good story. Very sad. I hope he finds another love someday. |
 Always a Bookworm 2/18/10 . chapter 13Aw, that's so sweet! I don't usually like puzzleshipping, but you made this work so well that I really enjoyed it. The opening scene with Yami was so sad, but I was very pleased that it had a happy ending. Well done, I really enjoyed this! :D
Bookworm |
 dragonlady222 2/16/10 . chapter 13Good story. I'm glad Yami took that pledge to always be there for Yugi. |
 dragonlady222 9/11/09 . chapter 12Nice story. I wonder what is wrong with Yugi and why he thinks it makes him a horrible person. |
 Always a Bookworm 9/11/09 . chapter 12Wow. I've just started reading this, and I have to say, I'm really impressed. You have a lovely, very read-able style of writing, and the romance in these little oneshots vary astoundingly from happy to sad. I love it!
I also really like how different this is; usually a fic like this with a load of different shippings in it only covers the main pairings (puzzle, tender, bronze, puppy) which means there are no surprises, and they aren't much of a challenge to write.
What I love about this, is that you've mixed in some really awesome, less well known pairings as well, like Antagoshipping, and the fantastically original first chapter- You completely made the YYxSKxMK pairing come to life! And when you did write the puzzle/tender, you gave it a twist. I loved how you had the three way pairing between Yugi, Yami and Ryou. That was such a clever way to end it.
Basically, I think this story is brilliant. Great job, and I'm looking forward to the next one! Keep up the fantastic work!
Bookworm |
 dragonlady222 4/11/08 . chapter 11Too bad he had to lose him. I'm glad Ryou didn't let him use him. Poor Yugi needs some comfort and caring but not sex. Good story. |
 dragonlady222 11/25/07 . chapter 10Very sad. I'm glad Yami confessed and Yugi is trying to forgive him. Everyone makes mistakes it takes a real man to admit it and beg forgiveness. |
 dragonlady222 10/18/07 . chapter 9Good ending. Poor Bakura but he really didn't help himself much, |
 dragonlady222 10/18/07 . chapter 8Good chapter. I wonder if Ryou still loves Bakura as well as the other two. Yugi seems to have feelings for Ryou as well. I hope they can work this out. |
 dragonlady222 10/18/07 . chapter 7Poor Bakura. I bet he cares about Ryou and doesn't want to face it. |
 dragonlady222 8/7/07 . chapter 6Good one. Those two would have to be an explosive combo. |
 dragonlady222 8/7/07 . chapter 5Good story. I can't figure out who it is but my best guess is Ryou and Bakura with Yami and Yugi my second choice. |
 Tap Dancin On A Land Mine 7/18/07 . chapter 4That is hularious! Joey ROCKS man! |
 dragonlady222 7/18/07 . chapter 4That was really funny. Joey finally got one over on Seto. |