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| Niysa 2008-09-14 ch 1, | abusewow! this goes perfectly with a zutara video im making! good job! |
| renagrrl 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty angsty, but not in a bad way. I only noticed two errors--one a spelling error; the other was a grammar issue. Nothing too glaring, though. Also, was this set for just after "Crossroads of Destiny"? If it was, I think it would be better for her feelings to be more conflicted, as opposed to loving. It seemed a little early for Katara to feel that way. While I think she would still be betrayed, I don't know it would be a in love way...Or maybe that's just me? Anyway, good job on one of your first fics--keep it up! |
| QuicktoSee 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseKatara is in "live" with Zuko? Might want to fix your summary there. |