Beautiful writing!
I love your character description of Norrington- you really got his character good. All his occasional narkiness, his gentleness and everything else about him.
I loved it

Wow. I must say,. so far this has been one of the best written stories about the dear commodore I've read on here. The emotions are so much to Norrington's character, and aren't overdone or underdone.

I also loved the suspense and mythology you added in. I can't wait for your next update.

Keep writing
~Pearl

I find the story intriguing and a potential to become a favorite for Norrington fans. Oh well, it's beautiful in its seemingly deep plot for redemption and I'm quite hoping you'd continue this. The last chapter left me hanging and wanting for more. Do continue?

This is a GREAT story! I love it, I love the characterizations too. Poor Norrington (aside from the three main characters, he's my favorite character) but still he's at least going to come to terms with everything...hopefully...it's going to be beaten into him, isn't it? I can't wait for the next chapter! Who's the guide? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Hm...most interesting. I'm curious as to what will happen next.

Very intelligently written. Great cliffhanger ending! I can't wait for the next chapter!

umm...is he in Hell or Heaven? the underworld...that sounds a bit like Hell but I'm not sure

This sounds good- I love Norrington to bits

I'm definately intrigued! Can't wait for more!

interestingly,i think this is a good story please do continue it has a good potential. please update?