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| animerox111 2008-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseno offense... but the beginning is confusung and the ending sux... -_- |
| BLUEMENTRIT 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseso sweet tomokaido is swet |
| dfisher25 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGood story you should do a sequel wen they are in high school. I like this story alot. Your a good author. |
| .the.alaskan.musical.pig. 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI envy Tomo-chan, she gets to take pic's of Kaido. You should wright a sql to this, please? |
| fuji_appleZ 2007-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw...^^ how sweet...! kaidoh's so sweet.. haha.^^ |
| cookiiex 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOh yay! Another Tomokai >D THis was cute! Tomoka with a camera? xDD Lol. Kaidoh ish so shy >3 Nice! -cookiiex |
| Pampers Baby Dry 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abusesquee! so cute!! love this pairing...bye |
| Her Cousin Was Here-Mwahaha... 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAw... that's so cute! |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseNice, it's good to know that someone write Kaidoh and Tomoka pairing! |
| Simplicity.Loved 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI like your fic.. but damn..! they are ( too much) general for "romance" fic! T.T but it was still good! :D |
| liltle 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseIt did make sense. She could be, I mean even anyone could find a hobby they could easily be attached too. It was beautifully made. I'd rather liked the serious-type of Tomoka, it shows how she'd start to grow up like the rest of them. I doubt even in the real POT world she'd stay the same like how she's potrayed in the present time. I'm very glad i had the opportunity of reading this. I mean there aren't so many of Tomoka's fics laying around and I think she need's every attention she could get. And i especially liked Tomo/Kai's stories, they are always entertaining and you could never get bored with it and there's always something to write about them. Like this one. Though I really wished for a continuation on this part of the ending but I respect your style of writing and I am very pleased with it not ending out being so cliche'. This is as original as it gets. To sum things up, I really like it!! |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseAw cute. I love you TomoKai stories. Anyway I used to dabble in photography myself (My favorite subject being my baby sister). Tomo would be a good press photographer cause she's loud and assertive. |