Oh my gad! So angsty. x_x

Poor Dai-chan. /sniffle/ I mean...even though I'm TOTALLY down for that kind of thing. xD The torture of Daisuke... But still. :D

Aagghh. I really liked this! The whole bubble theme...made so much sense! Huzzah; this is great.

Wow..., just wow. It's like bittersweet chocolate, beautiful and yet sorrowful. It's amazing, really, you should give yourself some more credit. ;) Good job.

Wow... *is amazed*

That was... for a lack of a better term, AMAZING.

Just pure fantastical lovelyness.

BV

That was wonderfully written, and beautifully described. :):D:P Awsome job! A good angst is always appreciated y me! ;P Keep writing! :):D:P Xd :3

Oh, this is your first angst fic? You could of fooled me! Whenever I write angst, I start to get way to absorbed in my story, and always make the end happy. I've only written two REAL angst fics.

This one-shot was so good, I really hope you make more one-shots to come.

Not bad, not bad at all. Considering I'm definitely not into yaoi or any other boy/boy action, though I have absolutely nothing against girl/girl action (that is just hot no matter which way you look at it; I'm a straight guy after all), but the story conjured the atmosphere quite nicely, no matter how much it always stretches my imagination about how Dark is like. Or maybe it's just cause I'm a bit drunk right now, anything looks good...

But keep in up anyways (and with up I don't mean anything hormonically lewd ;-)).

- Jani

That was very kewl! It takes on such a wonderful tone, and has very powerful emotion. I don't think it should be rated M, cause it isn't that inappropriate. More people will see it if you make it T! It's a very good bit!

Wow, this is your first dark fic? I really like it, insofar as much as I ever like dark fics. *laughs* And I think I need to go listen to that song now; people who mention songs in their fics should be paid advertising. Thanks!

Lilz