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| MclovinMcDreamy 2008-07-11 ch 42, | abusedang. this story was perfectly intense! you did a wonderful job combining romance, mystery, and suspense! i throughly enjoyed it. plus booth got shot in the butt, that was great :D |
| gemini1789 2008-04-20 ch 42, | abuseBrilliant story. I loved it |
| Nephthys Moon 2008-03-18 ch 42, | abuseGUH! First, I must commend your characterization. From start to finish, you've done an incredible job of keeping both Brennan and Booth in character, which is next to impossible in a romance between these two. Second, your story. Fantastic. You clearly have no problem working on research for your story to make it as believable as possible, and it shows. Finally - SQUEE! I loved it. It was a great read and I'm absolutely thrilled I picked it up. |
| BBLove 2008-02-11 ch 42, | abuseOh my God. That was amazing. I just read the whole thing in one sitting (dedication, I know lol) and that's some of the best fic I've ever read! |
| alice 2008-01-28 ch 38, anon. | abusei'm really enjoying the story so far, there's just one little criticism about this particular chapter - Brennan would definitely have heard of the Holy Grail - as an anthropologist she would have knowledge of Christian mythologies. other than that i think the story is great! |
| HarlequinHangman 2008-01-17 ch 42, | abuseAn affair, murder, cover-up? Conspiracy!! _>...Just...Noticed that...Anyway. Love this story!! |
| saragillie 2007-12-05 ch 42, | abuseVery nice twist at the end. This story was interesting and well written. |
| ShadowOnACloudyDay 2007-11-24 ch 41, | abuseI absolutely adore this story. I have a problem, however- most of the last chapter won't load! I'd appreciate it if you could e-mail it to me at . (If it's not too much trouble!) Thank you for the wonderful story! |
| DOC3 2007-11-14 ch 42, | abuseI'm sad to reach the end of this one as well... the case was a mind-bender, I was surprised at the end for sure ... I'm glad you left the 'I love yous' to a more appropriate place in the story as well. It seemed like a really natural point in the relationship, and I appreciated that. great job and I can't wait until you write another one! Doc |
| BonesDBchippie 2007-11-14 ch 42, | abuseff~ WHAT!? THIS is the END?!?! NO! Okay as incredulous as that seems I've gotta say...*B R A V O* ~~Take a BOW!! That is seriously one of the most twisted-wacked-out-interesting cases I've ever read about! I'll bet her editor would just about be in the looney bin over that book idea!! AND lets NOT forget...OH YEAH! He gets the GIRL!! LOV'D that line!! OH and YES!! She says "I love you too" to HIM!! *pumps fist in the air and hollars 'wooHOO!'* EXCELLENT-WONDERFUL fic!! *throws flowers and chocolate Booth's to you* A job WELL DONE!! L@@king forward to your NEXT adventure!! ~G :D |
| BonesDBchippie 2007-11-14 ch 41, | abuseff~ HOLY swiss cheese Batman!! LOL!! THAT was S O O O KEWL!! I was literally bouncing in my chair waiting for Booth to crack this kid! LOL! THAT was pretty EXCITING!! And again with the GREAT case info!! Gotta run now and catch up to the next chapter to see what nifty things Booth has in store for this guy! I certainly would NOT want to be on the other side of his interrogation table! YIKES! ~G :D |
| SillyBean23 2007-11-14 ch 42, | abusethat was absolutely amazing. i loved it. i'm really sorry to see it end, though. |
| TB 2007-11-14 ch 42, anon. | abusethis was a great romantic story mixed in with just the right amount of mystery and suspense, i am such a huge fan of the tv show bones and i am glad you started writing fanfic stories |
| DarkVampireAngel81 2007-11-13 ch 42, | abusewell i just loved reading your story! i believe it was my first fan fic i read on here and one of my favorites to read! =) |
| a2zmom 2007-11-13 ch 42, | abuseWhat a great wrap-up to the case. Complicated but all the pieces fit. And also a great wrap-up to Booth's and Brennan's burgeoning romance with Brennan admitting her feelings. |