Um...I dont think that I could think of anything coherent at the moment, but as in trying to muster something up this is all I have to say...

GUH!

This was incredibly well written, love the imagery and sense of character analysis that you used. SO them use of words and wow, TEH SEX, AMAZING!

So hey...you wanna do another chapter? Like a chapter 2 in bed, chapter 3 shower, chapter 4, couch, and so and so on until they used just about every surface?

I would have absolutely no complaints if you wrote a second chapter describing in LOTS OF DETAIL exactly what Jack is planning for the two of them.

In fact I see a series, the first chapter in the garage, second in the kitchen, third in the bathroom, fourth...you get the drift?? BTW did I mention this was really hot? I love how you write the buildup of sexual tension and I really enjoy seeing both POV's. MORE!!

Intense! I'll never watch Sam work on that bike in the same light again!

Another great story. Please do write a second chapter to this one!

I just found your fics and I am in love! You should definitly write more!
~Danielle

nice. Enjoyed this a lot. I noticed an error near the beginning. "in a nearly accessible spot" should be 'inaccessible'

Wow! Double Wow! This is fantastic!! It definitely needs a second chapter and a third and a fourth...

You've made this J/S shipper very happy!

Very hot. Great story.

HOT, i think you mean scorching! Wow.

Yep defiently needs a sequel! Loved it :)

Wow, great story first of all!

I love it.

Secondly, bonus points for the title - I don't know if it was a deliberate nod to "Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintainance" by Robert M. Pirsig, but either way, it's fantastic.

Wow! Cool...no...HOT!! That was great because to me it was very tastefully done. That was beautiful. Thank you!!

Excellent work! The tension fairly crackled across my computer screen.
Loved the violin metaphor...

Gee, the more warnings you gave, the more I relished reading the story. Hee, hee! You're right, a second chapter is needed!

Wonderful. Very nicely done. So Glad your friend convinced you to share the story with us.

Oh yeah, another great fic just loved it.