Beautiful,

I love the vocabulary, and the outfits

UPDATE WOMAN!
me likey the story :D
continue!

Love the idea of putting the Naruto characters in Tortall. Tenten will make a perfect parallel to a 'lady knight'.

Lol...Neji's words r definitely not 2 be taken lightly...i wonder if Tsunade saw that display...update!

Tenten kicks **. That is a definate truth that cannot be denied. ^^ Hope you update soon!

go tenten
update soon

My apologies in regards to your Aunt. I hope things go well for your family.

In regards to the story, I think it is absolutely amazing. A great fan of both Naruto and Tamora Pierce, I will admit to being a little skeptical at first, but this is truly great. And Neji and Tenten both seem to be freaking awesome.

neji is truly a nobleman...sigh...if only it were to happen in real life, lol! :)

update soon!

Sorr to hear about you Aunt and dont worry i really enjoyed this chapter. Update as soon as you can

Hope you update soon xD

Lol...sooner or later d whole court would be trying 2 play matchmaker wif both of them n Tsunade would most likely bet a lot of money on them...update!

This is awesome! I already love this story! MUAHAHA! KICK HIS BUTT TENTEN! Anyway, I REALLY hope you update soon! Ja!

another well written chapter. shizune's notations on tenten were good as it allowed more of tenten's character to show through another's observations. good luck on the next chapter.

I am very very intrigued by this story! I love the women's rights theme! and i love how tenten is not a **, a **, or an idiot- or typically, a very smart, beautiful girl who's life is crap until she meets hyuuga neji.
i love this story bcos it doesn't focus on looks. it only focuses really on her eyes, and that's important! it also focuses on her skills, and her etiquette, which i am very impressed by!

i dunno if u get me, but basically i am saying that i like this story bcos it's original, AND the theme is quite interesting. Tudor Japan, perhaps? i dunno...:D anyway, update soon! :D

oh i really like this! keep writing!