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Sonia120462
2008-10-08
ch 9,
abusereally good...update!
caity.cullen
2008-10-07
ch 9,
abuseahahaha, really good story! cant w8 2 read more =D
iceland
2008-10-06
ch 9,
abuseit is a good story to read and wonder what happens to harry while going to hogwarts. how will his former parents respond to seeing harry after all these years.
Guardian of Hope
2008-10-06
ch 9,
abuseAll right, I haven't watched Charmed in years, but I thought that this would be an interesting read and I was right. I was very pleased with the fact that I didn't have to mentally translate anything from improper grammer into something decent and that your plot is actually believable.

In other words, I'm biased to anticipate many bad Harry stories and yours was very very good.
Impius
2008-10-05
ch 9,
abuseUm, just so you know, schools in America start in September. Anyway, it's an interesting idea you have here.
Kaira5
2008-10-05
ch 9,
abuseThat was awesome. I love Harry as a Halliwell. And I always wanted the Halliwells to have a normal family. Great job! Update soon!
Anaelisa
2008-10-03
ch 8,
abuseI just read the rewritten chapters and I think they are great. Update soon, I can't wait to know when Alex talk with his parents about Harry.
Rawr Its Maddy
2008-10-02
ch 9,
abuseBEC MY LOVE.
i likee it.
yes i have finally read it.
AND YES I FINALLY AM REVIEWING.
be proud.
so babealicious. lol thats a cool word.
you should update..
AS WE ARE ON HOLIDAYS.
peruser
2008-09-30
ch 9,
abuseI like it that Harry got to grow up with a family that loved him. I always hated it in the books and movies when his relatives were cruel to him. I like it that Harry gets to be strong and able to stand up for himself. It's also great that he has younger brothers to stand with him. I look forward to the next update.
jumping-jo
2008-09-29
ch 9,
abuselooking forward to confrontation between james and lily
phoenix catcher
2008-09-27
ch 9,
abuseThis is great. I like how you've made Alex though I've noticed you keep changing his name between Alex and Alec. I've done it a few time myself so it's easy to do.

I hope you make Alex a proper character with at least some common sense. I've read a few of these types of stories and I always start losing interest when Harry twin/brother is rediculously shallow. It ruins the story I think.

I found myself thinking that a great side story to this would be of what happened the first time, how Harry met the Halliwells when he didn't go searching for Chris and then the years after Piper was killed and presumably Harry was harsher and he and Chris fought together and then why Harry let Chris come back on his own to fix the past.

Anyway, this is a brilliant story and it's original. Just don't fall into the trap that seems to swallow so many of the other stories along these lines. Keep it realistic.

I look forward to your update, whenever it may come.

Phoenix Catcher
LadySerenity0000
2008-09-24
ch 9,
abuseVery nice! Can't wait till they meet the potter's again! Bwaahaahaa! he he! Great job!
prince of assassins
2008-09-21
ch 9,
abuseI like the two brothers meeting. Can't wait for Harry to meet his parents! Make sure one of them cries!
Penneay7
2008-09-19
ch 9,
abuselet me just say that this story is awesome! im lovin it espesialy the way harry chews alex out! i wanted 2 anser your question ameican school starts in august soo yea... I love it pleaz update doom
Saric
2008-09-19
ch 9,
abuseReally good story and enjoyed the way that it was written. As to your question about the American school system...I believe that its the same in every state but where I live school starts in mid-August.
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