 Jane Doe 2009-12-12 . chapter 19 I just came across this one...and its really nice...
Well done! |
 Dragonflys-Girl 2008-11-30 . chapter 9It's pretty late that I'm just reviewing this now... I've read this many times and I always feel touched reading the interaction between Mac & Stella... and I was just having a discussion with another author - Lily - about the use of hands as analogy for the relationship between Mac & Stella, and how it connects them, and I just want to say thank you for the wonderful imagery you've created here in this chapter.
-Ki |
 seadragon10 2008-10-20 . chapter 19hey, i know you wrote that quite some time ago, but it's always nice to find a cute little story and read it without having to wait for an update. Thanks for writing it, i laughed a few times really loud! :) Nicely done! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 19Wonderful chapter! Very cute! I really enjoyed this story! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 18Wonderful chapter! Very cute! I really enjoyed it! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 17Wonderful chapter! Absolutely hilarious! I doesn't get any better than that! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 16Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! The ending was very cute! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 15Wow! Intense chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope they work it out! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 14Wow! That's gotta hurt! Him saying that! I hope this won't cause problems between them! Wonderful chapter! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 13Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Just amazing! I loved the basketball game! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 12Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Perfect! I really like this story! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 11Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! That was amazing! I really liked their interaction! Very cute! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 10Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very cute! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 9Wow! I really enjoyed it! Very cute ending! I enjoyed it! Barbie was funny! I really like this story! |
 Hazmatt 2008-10-08 . chapter 8Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet of Mac to get everyone something! I can understand Stella's confusion, Mac is acting differently, but I liked that! |