Very, very, very good! Perfect, if I do say so.

Excellent!Wonderful!

OooooOoooo...very nice. I'm new here so I decided to start with your wonderful piece. Somehow that just seems to fit Rampage and Depth Charge very much. To write in verse that is. Occasionally, I couldn't tell who was speaking but I still loved it. _ Great job _ Loved DC's lines in the eighth verse.