Will there be more? Please dont let it end there!

:O is sawyer alright? i hope he is. and i hope that he killed that stalker! imagine how awful it would be if he goes and it's just kate and amy left. :(
anyway, update soon you're doing really well! :D
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More please! This chapter was good but way too short. I really want to know what happened, so please please update soon!

damn! what happened? I really hope James is ok!

Don't say it was bad! For not having inspiration, I quite enjoyed it. The chap moved forward a bit, since Sawyer was actually 'doing' something about the problem, there was some cute Skateness ( nicely in character btw) and then a cool cliff hanger!

“I can see just fine.” He shot back wishing she would go back inside, he loved the woman to death but she could grind his last nerve when she wanted to. - Aww, I loved that part. Perfectly in character, because it's just so freakin' true! xD

Update soon!

They could hear Amy start to cry in the house and Katie rushed in to make sure she was okay, but James stayed out side, he was going to be here when he came back. - of course he would! james is obviously going to save his family. poor amy, she probably doesn't know what's going on. this is such a scary moment for the family, but i know they'll get through it. update soon! :D
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waow! hibbs or whoever it is had better stay away for some time!

YAY! Action finally! So, something happened...but who is it? It has to be Hibbs right? Unless you're tricking us!! lol jk Exciting stuff, I can't wait for a new chap.

Hibbs...I hope it's not him, this guy scares me...

I was thinking about Jack actually lol I really think he would be able to do something such as watching people at night, waiting outside their house...scaring...lol

OK,it was who I expected all along. :) Possibly... but what are they going to do about it? And what will happen in between then? I want somethign to happen! This fic is good, but very slow. Nothing happens, it's just them thinking about who it could be every chap practically. Add some action, a plot twist, anything! I love this so much, so sorry for the criticism, but please!

yeah, it could be hibbs. i think that sawyer shouldn't beat himself up because of it though, it's not his fault. although it would be scary if it continued to happen to a little girl. anyway, update soon! :)
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well at least they wouldn't come up to their room, right? cos kate and sawyer are there and the 'monster' would want to keep themselve secret.
great chapter and update soon! :)
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Aww, very good and touching as always, Angi. :)

“Stop asking me dammit! I don’t know, If I knew I would have done something more about it already!” His words were loud and harsh. - Sad that Amy had to hear him, but it's true. I like that Sawyer is getting increasingly stressed out and tense...I'm guessing because he knows a bit more than he's letting on? Aha, angst! hehe

Update soon, I'm eager for the story to move forward!

Arf I don't like it, the idea that somebody is there watching us...I hope they'll manage to protect themselves from this new threat!

Update!!

okay, now it's just getting spooky! *looks around in terror* who would be outside watching her? and those footprints obviously weren't any of theirs... i think that the idea about letting her sleep with them is the best one so far. update soon, it's getting really exciting... and spooky! :D
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