i love ur writing.. .write more.. .danie/numair all the way

Ah, a little expansion on your own personal explanation of Numair's great power. I can't remember which story it was where your Goddess mentioned that, but it was clever of you to expand on it. Intersting. It's hard to express the attitudes of gods and goddesses. I liked their exchange at the end.

Sable

Gods, pff.

Weird critters, all of them.

Oddly, it seemed slightly incestual.

interesting, i have never read a goddess and mithros fic before.

good idea, and it shows the origins of people like numair and alanna etc, people with lives that have been shaped by their gifts. well done.