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Reviews for: offbeat orange
Nietono-no-Shana
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Nice limericks, wow! I think I really beginning to like your stuff... X] And you really know how to tie stuff altogether at the end of your short stories; I like that!

-Shana-san
White Simplicity
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
LOL. wow, that was a really good friendship fic.
Kore wa suki desu. ^_^ "Sugoi Jobu!(Great job)?" ah ha... XD
sea kelp
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
you're amazing at humor. seriously. :D
ah, the 'idiot box' reference was great. and the last line was just lol-worthy -- nice way for olette to pop hayner's bubble.

the limericks were great. especially roxas' XD;
great job! you make me love the twilight town kids more than i already do.
warm.summer.nights
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
aw, cute.

Hayner showing a little bit of his soft side.

And the limericks were great, by the way.

Also, I loved the 'idiot box' reference.

XP

thanks for the (second!) entry~
Rehime
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
XD. This was cute. Very Hayner, and I got all sad when Roxas was mentioned.

Good work.
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