Very well written, I'd love if you wrote more!

i did injoy it, it was really weel written, i just recently saw this episdes 4 nights ago and they call this a childrens show the 5th line xanatos says is pay man enough and hell walk barefoot into hell so please do more fanfictions on this

I thought it was nice. very in-character

Wow, nice idea :) I really love it all so far :) Can't wait to read more. Nice job

Great start! I hope you continue! Are we going to see more of that jerk Gary Collins? _