Ha ha! The ending was so unexpected, i started laughing with my family asking me if I was crazy! Anyway, relli liked the undertone of disapproval from both parties. fits them!

Oh! Burn, Wyldon!
Good job:

The summary caught me. Also the words in italics at the top, which were uneccesarily teasing.
The writing, as usual, also good.
All in all, 100.

You never do see just how nasty Alanna can be. She probably could. They make light, but I think I might really really hate her.

Haha! Fun!!

Ah. Put Alanna and Wyldon in the same room and there's bound to be some amusement in sort for everyone. Great writing.

Hehe. Wyldon just got /told/!

Ahem. Excuse me. Hehehehehehe! I'm better now.

I think.

Write more, please!

~L-chan

But was Alanna just saying that to get rid of Wyldon?

lol! poor Wyldon!