A nice, thought provoking, and, with the poem, profound story. Thank you for writing it.

Wow, that was really great! Awesome job, and I thought you captured Colby perfectly.

interesting thoughts.

Nice job! I liked it a lot!

Interesting piece.

Beautiful. The poem was perfect.

Jo

To write is human. To edit is devine-Stephen King

My point is, like all human writer's- me included- we tend to provide an overload of info.

Your title grabbed me.

Your narration was very relateable.

I love spy flicks!