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SableMiyako
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
Hmm. I would say it's Alanna and George. It feels right, plus the line about all the children being grown with families of their own only fit those two during the war with the Scanrans. I initially thought Jon and Thayet, but that was crossed off rather quickly. Not Numair and Daine, either because they didn't have a child until much later on (if not the end of the war, then very near it).

Very wonderfuly written. Moving, even. The anonymity of it made it more personal somehow. Bravo.

~Sable Miyako
abyssgirl
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
er... George/Alanna. Really sad... :(
mashka96
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
it HAS 2b Numair!
lily moonlight
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
I can't make a guess who this is about, but it doesn't matter. Even nameless, this moved me so much, so sad in its simplicity. Loved the haunting refrain of more time, and the turnaround from that to wishing he would not have much more time to wait. My favourite line is 'He had lived before he met her, but he could not remember how'. Brilliant.
ticktockitsalreadyhalfwayover
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
who is he? i know you don't know but you must've had SOME idea...:D:D:D
Sheppo
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
wow, that was moving. i nearly cried. i thnk of it aa DomKel fic cause they were both in the north durring the war and their schedules didn't coordinate and th eline about him wishing that he had found his way to her sooner made me think of all the the time Kel liked him and didn't admit it. i always thought that he had a thing for kel.
Cerotoro
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
I was just dropping by and saw this, and it's very sad. yes, i know, Captian Obvious, but i just mentioned this to show it is an unusual read for me. Normally i only read happy stuff, but this piqued my puzzle curiosity. I read it three times, pondered, read it once more, then settled for George, or Numy as a back-up.
mistywabbit
2007-07-22 . chapter 1
My first thought was immediately Numair, but I think that's because the second sentence reminded me very much of a drabble I'd written about him and Daine. I think it's George now though, because Alanna and George hadn't seen each other for over a year at the start of Trickster's Choice, so they were most definitely not in the same fief during the Scanran war! The only other sentence that makes me think it's Numair is "What if he’d somehow found his way to her sooner?"

Anyway, it's very well written, although the first sentence seems to be in another tense to the rest of the piece. Is that intentional?
Polo Smurf
2007-07-16 . chapter 1
Going for a real guess here but...
Wyldon?
I love these drabbles they're fun!

Smurf
xx
Goddess of Purple Squirrels
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
Hmm, I was thinking either George or Numair.
Or Jon. I don't believe anybody else had put that.
I'mhotsodealwithit
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
I think it sounds like alanna george but than I think everything sounds like them!
mornir-brightflame
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
Is it Numair? I don't know .. I'm really bad at these things ..
a
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
I would say George or Dom
oirishgoddess
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
ohh that is so SAD. for some reason, i thought it was george, but there you go. very good.
deathequalsoul
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
you know, i actually cant think of anyone who would fit into it for some reason. for the first part,i thought it was numair, except he doesnt really talk like that, so im really not sure. oh well, it was sadbut good.
-mc :]
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