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Anon E. Mouse
2008-10-11 . chapter 3
Once again, painful emotion and demented humor blended together perfectly. I like the stick-up-your-ass schtick. Very nice.

I have to know- who are your favorite authors? Sometimes it sounds like you're influenced (not in a bad way) by James Patterson...so I was wondering. Now, I must listen to more Pink Floyd!
Anon E. Mouse
2008-10-11 . chapter 2
You are an utterly fantastic writer. This is both sarcastically funny and subtly sad.

...Okay, is it like adjective day for me or something? Anyway, love the story, so I have to go read the third chapter!

Think! About how funny it is that flammable and inflammable mean the same thing!
LiMiYa
2007-07-29 . chapter 3
emotionally intense.
Prescripto13
2007-07-29 . chapter 3
Fantastic. The interaction between Kakashi and Sasuke was amazing!
Rodick
2007-07-28 . chapter 3
Another good chapter. I love the way you write the fic.
Rodick
2007-07-28 . chapter 2
This chapter kinda hilarious. he he
Rodick
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Very interesting story. I love to dinf what happen next.
spello
2007-07-28 . chapter 3
Gosh! Is this kakasasu fic? I'm a fan of kakasasu. Hope you update real soon.
lyon in the meadow
2007-07-28 . chapter 3
that was pretty awesome, love the breadth of detail and whatnot, bit sad i've only got one more chpater to look forward to, but quality beats quanity hands down aye
re a/n: cheap thrills huh XD
darkenedmirrors.softfocus
2007-07-27 . chapter 3
This made me feel like crying, but grin like a maniac at the same time. I wish could write something with so much... feeling. It's like I know the characters more than I do when reading the manga. That's a great accomplishment.
Lapse - Raevn
2007-07-20 . chapter 2
Amazing, amazing work. You've written Kakashi so beautifully, in that everyone's not quite sure what he's up to and all. I adored his conversation with Iruka and Gai, haha. And Tsunade was nicely put in as well, with the "Whatever makes you sleep at night" comment. :P

And the fact that your chapters are so long and full of intent are great, too. I haven't a clue where you're going with this at all! But I can see Kakashi trying to right whatever wrongs he thinks he's made so far, by being a teacher, like his old sensei was to him. And you mentioned his father as well, too.

The part where he lost control of his anger and basically punched Sasuke in the face was fantastic, too. :D Kakashi's human, after all. ♥ The amount of thought put into the writing and all the details definitely put this on my favorites list. ^^ Good job!
Kirek
2007-07-20 . chapter 2
Every chapter is good so long as Sasuke is getting his ass kicked. Ayep.

You cut out a few parts though, shame, but eh. Fair enough.
Kirek
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
The beginning of the end of Kakashi.

*cackles*

YAY!

Haven't read this one before, I think. *goes to the next*
Prescripto13
2007-07-18 . chapter 2
This was a very good chapter. I laughed at Gai's theatrics, and snickered evilly at the thought of Sasuke getting humbled. The final scene you were talking about gave me goosebumps--there's this creepy, something-bad's-gonna-happen vibe to it. You're a killer with the cliffhanger!
MayaMay
2007-07-18 . chapter 2
Kakashi is certainly a very interesting and dynamic character, and I'm glad to see him written so well in this story. I read the last scene a couple times, as per your advising to pay close attention. There are some ideas on the significance, but these won't manifest until later chapters, I'm guessing.

The scene with Iruka made me laugh.
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