i was so freaking frightened that jesse and leslie were going to break up in this chapter (the chapter name).
thank gods they didn't. hahah.

Wow... great! This is a great story!

chap 11=best first kiss ever.
it was adorable!
i love the whole thing how jesse gets really like confident and stuff by the end is like "i told hoager that if he messed with my girl..." yeah.
greatt.
i love this a lot.

This is compltley and utterly amazing.I am currently on chapter 25 and have spent atleast 114 hours in the past two days reading this story.The way you portray Jess and Leslie is perfect very similar to them in The bridge to [ter].Im only on chapter 25 and am already wishing this story was longer than it is.This story should be the official sequel.My only wish that you would go further with it I know how long it must take but please for us consider continuing?

Found this and read it over the summer. First fanfic story ever read. Thank you for the good introduction to the fanfic world.

Looking forward to more of your work.

IHateSnakes, know what? I too literary DespisE snakes! And I thought I couldn't hate them more - guess I was wrong. Yestereve my freak of a cousin thought that it was funny to set loose (not the H.P way)of her 'pet' snake and apparently the ThiNg decided that my neck was a nice warm place to slither and sleep! Gr!... by the time that the ThiNg was removed and locked far away I was then imagining the most painful and excruciating ways to kill my oh-so-cuddly cousin using a tiny spatula. I mean I even thought that I could use the spatula as a shovel to bury her. But since I don't want to spend my life in prison and I still somewhat love my dearest cousin -

I just busied myself with the Internet to cool down my 10 degress fahrenheit boiling blood and found this in YouTube when I was watching a video of AnnaSophia (this was referred by people there in the comments area by the way). And right now I'm your number one fan! I'm not really into reading and fanfiction(dot)net but your alternate story of BtT is very good and I also feel that the ending in Paterson's book and the movie was kinda like pointlessly upsetting, sad and tragic even if it was the whole point of it. But back to this story! Aside from the suicidal Time-Travel part this is really great. Your characterization of the characters especially Jesse and Leslie are pretty cool. The pacing is very well done and the length of this is also decent too. Your writing style is neat and it even seems captivating... and that's a lot coming from me considering I'm not really an avid reader. Looking for the next Chapter.

ISoHateSnakes(and Reptiles).

Umm, just for reality's sake, since the rest of this fic seems to be realy well researched: Doctors in the Psych field are not allowed to discuss details about their case, including their patients' names. The only exception to this rule is if they believe (through information gained through therepy) there is a danger that the patient might harm others.

I loved it! I honestly warmed so much to the characters of Leslie and Jess in 'Bridge to Terabithia' and I am so happy that you have revived the ending to their story. Thanks for the story.
Simone

OMG...this is definatly THE best peice of writing i have ever read without a show of a doubt...the plot, characters and everything in it is great...

in a word... a materpeice

1.) Great Chapters
2.) Splendid Plot
3.) Fantastic Characters
4.) Brilliant Writer
5.) One of a Kind Fanfic
6.) Beautifully Written
7.) Thank You for Sharing! Toinkz!

This is an amazing piece, And there are very very minor like 3 or 2, spelling errors but it astounds me.

This is definitely the best story I've ever read. I love everything about them growing up! :D I really enjoyed reading this.

Oh thank goodness - you really scared the ** out of me there.

Thanks for resisting the temptation to make it a sad ending.

best line:

“But Jess… what you said… Did you…do you really feel that way….about me?”

Nice idea, having Jess explain the happenings of the last two years in his head in public.

best line:

In a dull, monotone, Jesse told stories about himself and Leslie, how they had been outcasts and bullied by others at school and his feelings of neglect at home. In the booth, Mr. Aarons dropped his head in shame, recognizing the truth of his son’s statements. Next, Jesse told of how Terabithia had become a haven for them, and how they had learned to face their problems and fears. And how it had drawn them together.

"A/N: So, it was all in his head, as they say. Not long after starting Part 1, I realized it was a mistake to add an element of Science Fiction into the story"

Backtracking on the time travel would seem to be erroneous... first time I've ever found fault with this great fic...