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jemovampiress
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
MEIN GOTT! you really need to finish this soon! or just update...
Lovedward48
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
I'm very impressed by your works!! I only wish you didn't abandon this! I usually don't read stories that seem to be on hiatus but after I read Tread Softly I couldn't help myself. I needed to see Severus and Harry back together! If you ever remember this story maybe you could consider finishing it. It's such a brilliant story it deserves an ending! :)
Sexy Sevy
2009-10-12 . chapter 10
come on!! write the end of this perfect fic!!
Lilith-The-Destroyer
2009-10-10 . chapter 10
GAHH. Oh dear I really have to say you write an awesome amazing and wonderful story...rather stories. I have just read both Ashes of Time until this chapter and all of Tread Softly and I am very much in awe of your skill. You write a mean story, I could not seem to bring myself to stop reading until I had devoured every word. I think you have written by far one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have read to date. I thank you most humbly for being kind enough to share your talent with the rest of the world, or just crazy fanfic readers. Now I'm off to read your other story. I will be waiting patiently and impatiently for the next chapter of Ashes of Time, hopefully you'll have enough time and be slightly motivated from my kind words to work on it..."wink, wink, nudge, nudge" :D well nice showering you with praise now on to more fanfic...
Hysteria and Chaos
2009-10-08 . chapter 10
Oh gosh... this is sad and thrilling at the same time.
Please update... as soon as possible.
Mischivous Purple One
2009-10-05 . chapter 10
*wide eyed* I really like this one so far! I absolutely love how you keep teasing teh characters too, makes for a very interesting read! PLEASE update sometime soon!
Bobette13
2009-09-27 . chapter 10
aww, poor harry! it's not his fault he's scary powerful...

severus needs to get the stick out of his butt and realize he's being an idiot!!

oh, and very good story, by the way, although i want the angst to end soon. for a while, anyways. have a feeling it shall come back.
and i also have a feeling something leading to that is gonna happen in the next chapter, so update soon? please?!

8/10 so far.
Fear-me-evil-bunnies
2009-09-27 . chapter 10
i was so happy to find out that this had a sequel. i must say that it is quite good. i cant wait for u to update it.
konamiya
2009-09-21 . chapter 10
In fact I'm a chinese.I am not good at English^ ^.Please don't care about some mistakes in my sentences^ ^. I read your story which had been translated into chinese__.And after the reading, I felt very sad. So even though I'm not good at english, i'd like to read the next one.
^I want to find the new story cuold make a happiness in the life between potter and sev.
That's all.

thank you for your story!!

谢谢你的文章。
Vine Verrine.
2009-09-02 . chapter 10
Ok...I read this a year ago and loved it so much that I even wrote a fan fiction inspired by the somber, realistic, sweet in a very deceitful way the relationship between Severus and Harry was. I even told my readers "Go to read it because MY GOD, that guy knows how to write" It was somehow a futile attempt because my mother language is Spanish and then you know what language my readers speak -_-

I had hoped that somehow you would update; I mean, the only works that I've come to love because they are so In Character are yours and BC's Pantogogue (you really should read that one) But then I saw one of your LJ entries and apparently you don't want to update because you don't receive a lot of reviews; the adolescents read them for the sex, and maybe you are just to busy (but you didn't even bothered with a message saying "You know what **, I got better things to do to entertain your little brains with my holy mind. Go get a life" Some how that response seems plausible for the fact that you don't write for the reasons above)
Maybe my memory is going rusty, but in Thread Softly even the KISSES were managed to a minimum (that's why I loved both of them, they are not erotic in that sense, but in the management of the character and the deepness you added to them that even Joe Rowling lacked...hers was precise but with undertones that made it beautiful...but yours *sighs dreamily*)

I think it's kind of unfair because after a long time this particular work has 486 reviews with just 10 chapters...that's a lot in such a crowded fandom like Harry Potter. BC's Pantogogue has 32 chapters and 428 reviews...but she isn't complaining. I think that one is actually better because it's FINISHED.

Really, I think readers are quite mad but not because you don't update, but because you just can't sit, log in and leave a f*ucking message saying you just won't continue with the story (which is a shame, I'm sure that if anyone had the balls and force of will to take it on, it wouldn't be the same)

So think a little about this...it's obvious a writer doesn't write just for itself. But this is a contradiction...it's absolutely selfish and plain childish.

Just write a message and I'm sure no one will bother you...if they do, well then it's your fault for writing such splendid work and for not finishing it -_-

P.S. I'm very sorry for the bad English. I'm sure it's quite messy.
Loxodonta-Magica
2009-09-01 . chapter 10
I am enjoying this sequel as much as the first! I am worried about both Harry and Sev...I really want to see them happy together at some point, and yet the angst and tension of the story is so delicious! I'm also concerned about the magnitude of Harry's powers and whether he will let the light side or the dark side of his soul be the dominant one. What will the ministry be forced to do? What will they be ABLE to do? It's all so nerve-wracking! Hope your schedule allows an update soon, but I know quite well how real life rears up and takes over the best of writing times!
@nnie
HinoteMeize
2009-08-26 . chapter 10
MWAHA! D8 wait... where... this... I...! *sits in a corner and waits for update*... -.-
mykyou
2009-08-24 . chapter 10
such a pity this is not being updated, i'd so much like to know how the story ends.
Would've0Could've0Should've
2009-08-20 . chapter 10
WHAT THE HECK! Is that supposed to be the flippen ending! Ahg that ain't the ending cause you didn't put it as complete! You can't just freaking stop like that! That is cruel and unusual punishment and it's also very mean and bad and horrible and distasteful and all those other synonims you know what I mean! I can't believe you did this to me! I love your stories and you had better update this one or god help me! I know it's been a whole year but still!
Update soon... Or else (:
-wcs
Nyxxx
2009-08-16 . chapter 10
Arg! I've just read Tread Softly and all these chapters that I hadn't read before and...
Arg! You're killing me, you know that?
I absolutely love your stories! And your Snape... You are very talented, in my opinion if it matters!
I missed Jonathan though, his point of view I mean.
All my good thoughts for the continuation!

(ps: oh, english is not my mother tongue, so sorry for my poor grammar!)
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