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Melinda Wyatt Charmed
2008-08-13
ch 1,
abuseOMG! That was so sad! You really made me cry. Chris's image in my head cleaning the kitchen floor was really devastating! I loved Wyatt's last quote the most “She IS proud of you, Chris! I swear to god, she is…!” It was great! Really awesome! Keep up the good work!
ladylookslikeadude
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was sweet.
sn0zb0z
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseGreat story and well written. Well done!
piperspeanut
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseI loved this oneshot it was great I have read it more than once...wish it was longer but it was good.
Evil Amplified
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseAh that was such a good story. It was so full of emotions. I absolutely loved it.
PrInCeSsFBi
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseKyle: HEY! Howw come you didn't tell us she had another one
Lena: I didn't know!
Dean: Well you should have!
Lena: HEY! Listen you i do not spend my entire day on the computer! i do have a life you know!(sends evil glare)
Dean: O God...Sorry!
Lena: That's better!ok now tell her you like it
Everyone: WE LOVE IT
criminally charmed
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseok, you can so see Chris doing that, Wyatt being so protective and Leo being such a clueless idiot. you made me cry
Beleninwe
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was... so... sweet! Sorry I didn't come before, I've been crazily busy these days :) Ok, well... I'll admit that I was waiting because I wanted to be review number 10, but I couldn't wait more :P

Awesome job, I want more, will there be more, yes? Man, that Leo can be imprudent!

Love to see you back so soon!
lac t
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abusegreat to see this! excited to read more.
Manavie
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseAw...That was cute. Hope you'll write more Wyatt and Chris stories.
Witty-Kate
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseaw bless
k9cat
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseAw...

hello again... I just wanted to say, that, once again... You have reduced me to tears...

=(

=3 k9cat
DimpleBulbo
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abusegood story!
zeria
2007-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked it. Short, sweet and to the point. I like how Wyatt knew to ask Leo what he had said, and how he took care of Chris, very sweet. I could see Chris actually doing something like that when he was younger too-- seemed in character. Leo...I could see him slipping up and saying something stupid, but I'm not sure he'd do it so soon after Piper had died. Still, it was good. The way it was written made it very enjoyable :)
dreamgirl93
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseoh Leo sometimes he says the most inappropriate things, but I know he doesn't mean. I'm glad Wyatt's there for Chris and not off in the underworld.
I liked it. Very nice.
Great job!
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