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| Melinda Wyatt Charmed 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That was so sad! You really made me cry. Chris's image in my head cleaning the kitchen floor was really devastating! I loved Wyatt's last quote the most “She IS proud of you, Chris! I swear to god, she is…!” It was great! Really awesome! Keep up the good work! |
| ladylookslikeadude 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was sweet. |
| sn0zb0z 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story and well written. Well done! |
| piperspeanut 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI loved this oneshot it was great I have read it more than once...wish it was longer but it was good. |
| Evil Amplified 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAh that was such a good story. It was so full of emotions. I absolutely loved it. |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseKyle: HEY! Howw come you didn't tell us she had another one Lena: I didn't know! Dean: Well you should have! Lena: HEY! Listen you i do not spend my entire day on the computer! i do have a life you know!(sends evil glare) Dean: O God...Sorry! Lena: That's better!ok now tell her you like it Everyone: WE LOVE IT |
| criminally charmed 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseok, you can so see Chris doing that, Wyatt being so protective and Leo being such a clueless idiot. you made me cry |
| Beleninwe 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was... so... sweet! Sorry I didn't come before, I've been crazily busy these days :) Ok, well... I'll admit that I was waiting because I wanted to be review number 10, but I couldn't wait more :P Awesome job, I want more, will there be more, yes? Man, that Leo can be imprudent! Love to see you back so soon! |
| lac t 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusegreat to see this! excited to read more. |
| Manavie 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAw...That was cute. Hope you'll write more Wyatt and Chris stories. |
| Witty-Kate 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseaw bless |
| k9cat 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseAw... hello again... I just wanted to say, that, once again... You have reduced me to tears... =( =3 k9cat |
| DimpleBulbo 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusegood story! |
| zeria 2007-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it. Short, sweet and to the point. I like how Wyatt knew to ask Leo what he had said, and how he took care of Chris, very sweet. I could see Chris actually doing something like that when he was younger too-- seemed in character. Leo...I could see him slipping up and saying something stupid, but I'm not sure he'd do it so soon after Piper had died. Still, it was good. The way it was written made it very enjoyable :) |
| dreamgirl93 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseoh Leo sometimes he says the most inappropriate things, but I know he doesn't mean. I'm glad Wyatt's there for Chris and not off in the underworld. I liked it. Very nice. Great job! |