i like this one. it's nice to read about a different POV besdes the main characters.

ha ha...I thought it was Kanae-san at first but hey!I can dream, right? ^^

Please don't end it so soon!
At least add two more chapters.

this is really good!

DarkC

That was magic. Awesomeness. And it was such a natural conversation! You really captured Yshiro, too. Wonderful. :)

Awesome Fic!
I loved the thinking in it.
So Good!

I would love to have this written into the manga. It's formidable! I'm not sure that's a proper word in english, but it's supposed to mean that I really like yor story. :)

^_^ oh, great oneshot. truly enjoyable. both managers lamenting over their charge and kyoko.
definately liked the description of shou toward here.
hope to find more fics of yours and wouldnt mind ths one continuing.

This was a fun coincidence! :)

OMG the pure irony is just great!! I love it!! I wonder if these two would ever get in a fight reguarding who Kyouko is better suited with?? lol!

Misilver

yay, i love skip beat. and your is the first fic i've been able to get in too. hope the next chapter is quickly in coming.

So, out of the, what, twelve stories for Skip Beat! I've instinctively eliminated the bad ones and have studiously avoiding clicking their links. Obviously, that means yours is one of the good ones. I'm happy to say that I don't regret reading it.

I loved the dramatic irony and how you started with Yashiro not having a place to sit. And then, the whole "it was one thing to tell Ren to go after a woman he was attracted to; doing it himself was completely different" was a very nice touch and helps the characterization a lot. Meanwhile, I can totally imagine Shou reacting that way to Kyoko's words. I especially liked that Yashiro figured out who he was dealing with at the end.

I will say, however, that it seems slightly unlikely that out of everyone in the cafe, he would know no one. After all, he is the manager, so he's the one who's supposed to be recognizing people and reminding Ren who they are. But I will concede that he probably doesn't know Shouko, especially since she's another manager. (Ironic, isn't it? The managers probably know everyone but the other managers.)

Anyway, I enjoyed this piece. I hope you'll continue to write more!

A.E

Ah, yes, this charming little story. I read it on lj, I think... or maybe not. In any case, it's really well-written, with solid versimilitude. I could certainly see this scene actually happening in the manga. (Especially since it possesses no threat to the main canon.)

Thanks for a nice read. It was fun ^_^

To put it simply, I loved it! The story had a nice flow and the characters were exactly like in the manga. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if this scene actually happened. ^.^ Keep up the great work!

An interesting and highly-plausible moment between Yashiro and Shouko, with mainly solid writing and a nice control of the situation.

Good work, going onto the favourites! :)