I was reading this story more then once,because I didn´t got the situation at first...and now I´m writing something..at last. -_-°

Nyaa..I really liked the way you caught the atmosphere with your words.
And the end is for me..like a good cliff hanger!^_^

Yeah,and a lot of time passed since you posted this story,but I hope you can write something like this again.
It was kinda cute!!

mfg Lie

You know the personalities better than you give yourself credit.I wasn't sure what to expect,but I was quite pleased.It was very cute :3 And writen very well in my opinion

Are you sure you know "painfully little" about the series?

Seriously, you could of fooled me, this is one of the better romance powerpuff fics I've read on this site!

Loved the writing! Very good characterization of those two even if you haven't actually watched the series yet.

This is the best KaoruxMiyako fic I've read so far! Your writing style is beautiful. And no worries about the characterization, you nailed it perfectly.