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| xxakp 2007-07-28 ch 4, | abusegreat job! i loved the ending, and you did very good with showing their emotions - it was very realistic. |
| racefh853629 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseHaha, nice ending :) Great job! |
| regan666 2007-07-19 ch 3, | abuseoh my god the ending was absolutly fantastic, i didnt see it coming. and as usual your writting skills never cease to amaze me. great story, it was really deep and tragic, thank you for sharing. sinead. |
| El Gringo Loco 2007-07-14 ch 3, | abuseAn interesting story. A bit confusing at first, especially as to the status of the characters. But it begins to make sense towards the end of chapter 3. I look forward to reading more. |
| GSfanatic 2007-07-14 ch 3, | abuseThis chapter really surprised me. I love surprises (well, the good ones). Is there going to be another chapter or is this the last one? Cause if this is the last one it had a great ending. |