That was cute and nice. Awesome job!

I love stories like this that deal with the situation. I don't know why. XD

Nicely written. Plus I love the Atticus/jaden relationship so it works. XD

great joB!

I really like this. I haven't actually seen anything past what they're showing of the dub, minus a couple of subbed episodes I've managed to come across, but I know what happens, and this does seem plausible. Funny, I've started to write something set after the Yuber thing, too. Lots of nice angst to work with there...

Alright, since I'm getting off track now, I'd just like to say wonderful job with this! I like that Fubuki was the one to talk to Judai. He knows kind of what Judai is going through, and what Judai blames himself for. I'm sure Fubuki blamed himself after the whole Darkness thing, too. Great work! ^.~

I really enjoyed reading this and I can picture this happening. Made me laugh with the ninja thing but Fubuki makes a great point and this was brilliantly written.

~Arieru

Stealth like ninja! XD I loved this one shot and I can really see these things possibly happening in the anime too! Great job, especially with Fubuki ;D

Ooh, i liked this, it's well-written. Fubuki's got a good point! -faints-
Angel..x