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| Grissom1 2008-08-13 ch 9,  | abuseTaking a break from writing and I ran across this story. I really enjoyed your style and the content. Great job! |
| jacksparrowluva12 2008-03-12 ch 9, | abuseThis is a really good story. You write really beautifully, it's detailed but not too much that it's confusing. You give really good insight to each person, and the plot was good too. Good job :) |
| Wander52 2007-10-08 ch 9, | abuseI'm really later going to work...I've gotten hooked your stories. They're great...I like the way you bring them to a conclusion and tell both sides. I'll have to save the rest for later. Thanks for the entertainment. |
| seeyoustandingthere 2007-07-21 ch 9, | abuseIt really is rare that I want to read a fic again. And again, and again. I read each chapter twice, some of them three times. This is really very good. It is rare to find a fic that makes good use of first person and doesn't sound trite. Apart from a scattering of grammatical errors that aren't too much to worry about, this story really ranks up there with the best I've read. Thanks for sharing and do keep writing. |
| regan666 2007-07-18 ch 9, | abusewow it has to be said that i think you are one of the most talented writters that i have ever read on here, the detail and the emotion is fantastic and this is like the most formal review i have ever written. i cant find a word to describe your writting, the story was beautiful, thank you very much . |
| Summer Reign 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuseVery nice job! Good backstory and I like the way you handled the romance of it all. Thanks for sharing! |
| xxakp 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abusegreat job! i loved the ending! |
| Golden Grasshopper 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuse"Our lives mingled quite naturally." To me, this great line kind of sums up the story. I enjoyed this tremendously. Thank you so much for sharing your talents. :) |
| hollyu 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusethis is very good. VERY VERY GOOD. You are on track the entire way and its is easy to read. |
| graciebutterfliedgsr 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuseI meant to review this ages ago and forgot. This is by far one of my favourite beginning GSR relationship fic! I love it! |
| Klee Wyck 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuseCommitted is one of my favourite episodes, so I love to read different writers' takes on it. This was great, and very much in character, which is always a big bonus for me. We worked our cases, we shared our lives, we loved. That line pretty much sums up their wonderful relationship for me. Great job ;) |
| MySoap 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHi, I really like your story and its sad that you don't get more reviews. I will recommanded your story onytdaw. kerstin |
| chiops 2007-07-15 ch 5, | abuseWhat a very sweet and hot chapter (I am reading at livejournal but commenting here). I loved the part when Sara commented about the cure for headaches. Thanks a lot! |
| chiops 2007-07-14 ch 4, | abuseI just have to tell you how great this chapter was, before I read on (and I am very eager to learn how the story goes on). I like your writing style and how real both characters are. Thanks a lot for writing this story. |
| Peggy47 2007-07-14 ch 9, | abuseYou did an amazing job writing "Cobwebs". You wove into your story complex details of Sara's past that show the entanglement of her life. The simple ceremony near the end and the touching way Brass was aware of the event made it a "good day all around." |